短文改错真题训练（07）

Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei

Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous                  76. ______

mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather           77. ______

was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of                      78. ______

the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we             79. ______

climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples              80. ______

and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture              81.______

since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.        82. ______

Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top        83. ______

of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was      84. ______

good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my                  85. ______

head touched the pillow.

答案和解析：

本文记述了游览峨眉山的情况。

76. 在famous前加a，注意mountain是单数可数名词。

77. 正确。

78. we 前加when，时间状语从句缺少连词引导。

79. them 改为us。短文为第一人称。

80. visiting 改为visited。fed, visited, told 为并列谓语。

81. picture 要用复数形式pictures。

82. passes 改为passed，整个文章基本时态为一般过去时。

83. 去掉down。

84. and 改为but。因为此处意义发生转折。

85. 去掉at。the moment在此用作连词，相当于 as soon as。